excellently done. i'm beginning to think that i like your work.

i'd love it if you review mine.

The ending is fabulous. Good work, as usual. The imagery was definitely strong and...wow.

your words are a knife on my flesh. A morbid yet unforgetable beauty.

the ending killed me. my favorite line, no doubt. but then again, so is the rest of the poem.

I love the way this starts and ends. Those two lines just completely blew my mind. There are parts in the middle I'm not so sure about ("too-short nails" & "shaky bricks in your wall," to be specific), but in general, I really liked this. The title is also achingly perfect. Keep writing! :)

i ** love this. especially the first stanza.

your words have so much power it's unbelievable.

♥

hands down to those beautiful disasters

this is... a monday morning and you can't remeber anything about the weekend.. i dunno. harrowing maybe? it's just heartbreak and angony and torment. wraped up in a pretty pretty package of words. you take my words, my breathe, everything with these things hun. you amaze me, because you're amazing.
iloveyou

&& that last line is what tears you apart in just the right way. it makes the rest of the poem resonate so much more.

Wow. Very good work.

/you wear me like a complex./ Loved it.