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| Apathy International 2007-04-30 ch 1,  | abuseexcellently done. i'm beginning to think that i like your work. i'd love it if you review mine. |
| Idiot Pilot 2007-02-26 ch 1, | abuseThe ending is fabulous. Good work, as usual. The imagery was definitely strong and...wow. |
| amillionlittlepieces 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseyour words are a knife on my flesh. A morbid yet unforgetable beauty. |
| lackluster 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abusethe ending killed me. my favorite line, no doubt. but then again, so is the rest of the poem. |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseI love the way this starts and ends. Those two lines just completely blew my mind. There are parts in the middle I'm not so sure about ("too-short nails" & "shaky bricks in your wall," to be specific), but in general, I really liked this. The title is also achingly perfect. Keep writing! :) |
| riotmaker 2007-02-17 ch 1, | abusei ** love this. especially the first stanza. your words have so much power it's unbelievable. ♥ |
| InxUtterxSilence 2007-02-17 ch 1, | abusehands down to those beautiful disasters |
| call me ish 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abusethis is... a monday morning and you can't remeber anything about the weekend.. i dunno. harrowing maybe? it's just heartbreak and angony and torment. wraped up in a pretty pretty package of words. you take my words, my breathe, everything with these things hun. you amaze me, because you're amazing. iloveyou |
| dollface and her cancer 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abuse&& that last line is what tears you apart in just the right way. it makes the rest of the poem resonate so much more. |
| Trinity Spark 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abuseWow. Very good work. /you wear me like a complex./ Loved it. |