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Apathy International
2007-04-30
ch 1,
abuseexcellently done. i'm beginning to think that i like your work.

i'd love it if you review mine.
Idiot Pilot
2007-02-26
ch 1,
abuseThe ending is fabulous. Good work, as usual. The imagery was definitely strong and...wow.
amillionlittlepieces
2007-02-24
ch 1,
abuseyour words are a knife on my flesh. A morbid yet unforgetable beauty.
lackluster
2007-02-22
ch 1,
abusethe ending killed me. my favorite line, no doubt. but then again, so is the rest of the poem.
no.peace.los.angeles
2007-02-18
ch 1,
abuseI love the way this starts and ends. Those two lines just completely blew my mind. There are parts in the middle I'm not so sure about ("too-short nails" & "shaky bricks in your wall," to be specific), but in general, I really liked this. The title is also achingly perfect. Keep writing! :)
riotmaker
2007-02-17
ch 1,
abusei ** love this. especially the first stanza.

your words have so much power it's unbelievable.

InxUtterxSilence
2007-02-17
ch 1,
abusehands down to those beautiful disasters
call me ish
2007-02-16
ch 1,
abusethis is... a monday morning and you can't remeber anything about the weekend.. i dunno. harrowing maybe? it's just heartbreak and angony and torment. wraped up in a pretty pretty package of words. you take my words, my breathe, everything with these things hun. you amaze me, because you're amazing.
iloveyou
dollface and her cancer
2007-02-16
ch 1,
abuse&& that last line is what tears you apart in just the right way. it makes the rest of the poem resonate so much more.
Trinity Spark
2007-02-16
ch 1,
abuseWow. Very good work.

/you wear me like a complex./ Loved it.
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