 Apathy International 2007-04-30 . chapter 1excellently done. i'm beginning to think that i like your work.
i'd love it if you review mine. |
 Idiot Pilot 2007-02-26 . chapter 1The ending is fabulous. Good work, as usual. The imagery was definitely strong and...wow. |
 amillionlittlepieces 2007-02-24 . chapter 1your words are a knife on my flesh. A morbid yet unforgetable beauty. |
 lackluster 2007-02-22 . chapter 1the ending killed me. my favorite line, no doubt. but then again, so is the rest of the poem. |
 no.peace.los.angeles 2007-02-18 . chapter 1I love the way this starts and ends. Those two lines just completely blew my mind. There are parts in the middle I'm not so sure about ("too-short nails" & "shaky bricks in your wall," to be specific), but in general, I really liked this. The title is also achingly perfect. Keep writing! :) |
 riotmaker 2007-02-17 . chapter 1i ** love this. especially the first stanza.
your words have so much power it's unbelievable.
♥ |
 InxUtterxSilence 2007-02-17 . chapter 1hands down to those beautiful disasters |
 nectar in a sieve 2007-02-16 . chapter 1this is... a monday morning and you can't remeber anything about the weekend.. i dunno. harrowing maybe? it's just heartbreak and angony and torment. wraped up in a pretty pretty package of words. you take my words, my breathe, everything with these things hun. you amaze me, because you're amazing.
iloveyou |
 dollface and her cancer 2007-02-16 . chapter 1&& that last line is what tears you apart in just the right way. it makes the rest of the poem resonate so much more. |
 Trinity Spark 2007-02-16 . chapter 1Wow. Very good work.
/you wear me like a complex./ Loved it. |