I like this! You're a very good poet, I must say; short poems are very much your strength. Marvelous, simply marvelous!

I've gotten to doubting you are so optimistic actually... All of your short poems are so, so, so short, but they get their point across. Maybe you should compile them?

Wow. This is the epitome of ambiguous endings. Hunting spree? :P This can be taken so innocently...at the same time that it can be taken in a very sad/violent manner.

Notice how my vocabulary fails me today. My brain melted a couple of hours ago due to incredible pain in my back (I think my spine is corroding) so please forgive anything stupid that might slip my lips (or fingers O.o)

love ya

... and cheerfully go on a hunting spree!

Finally, we have a happy person on Fictionpress :)