|Reviews for Rachel|
| Nokturnal Augury 2/16/07 . chapter 1
There's only one verb in this :o and it's at the very end of the middle sentence. The lack of verbs makes the poem so ambiguous, yet it adds to the feel and the atmosphere that you are trying to create. In other words, I love it. ;_; wish I could write like this.
But oh well.
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