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Reviews For: gone now

simpleplan13 2008-05-21 ch 1,	abuseGone is what has become of my will to go one now... on The format became a bit repetitive and wordy... I'm not so sure the now is really needed in ever single line and just phrasing things that way is awkward, but I like the idea of describing all those different things about you and then things about the other person... very nice job.
Rhapsody in Red 2008-04-19 ch 1,	abuse"Erasing you completely is what is done now." I live for reading magnificent lines such as this. Your really rather good at poetry. This is a poem that motivates me to move on with life no matter what, which is amazing because it means that you have the power to use your words to effect others.
breedlove 2008-01-04 ch 1,	abuseThis is very well-written, I think that in some poems the type of repitition that you have used here can get sloppy or can start to sound overused, but I think you have used it in a way that doesn't make the poem seem pretentious. If I read it outloud, it sort of sounds like it could be a song. You have a way with words and I think that your poetry is better than you give yourself credit for. ^^
rira-chan 2007-02-16 ch 1,	abusevery good work. i loved the repitition of 'now' ^^ i enjoyed it. ~rira-chan