Awesome story! Holy crap! You absolutly MUST update this soon! I cannot wait! I needs it!

I actually hope Jack and Saber get it on at some point but I cant tell lol...anyway fabulous story cannot wait to read more :)

It's really well balanced in humor and serious...icity?

And I like the realistic way the characters vary, too.

;P

AMAZING!
I love your writing...it's better than what I see on "Law and Order", very believable. I love the interplay between Jack and Saber.

PLEEASE update when you can!
This is a great story. You're very talented.
Best,
Micah

I love this story. The way Saber's personality changes on a dime is amazing, and I adore Jack. He's my favorite character. And I'm looking forward to finding out who Holly is, and if Saber and Sasha will get together (even if I don't want them to).

Please update soon!

I am utterly confused and yet fascinated at the same time. :) Can't wait for the next update!

aw. I want to know more about Saber, please. It's all very intriguing, but it's killing me! the suspense! haha. I like this fic, and cheers for the update.
- Sy

Snappy, intriguing beginning. Looks to be good writing and still in the works. I think I'm hopping on the bandwagon. :)

This is such a unique story, really. It feels like a whirlwind when I'm reading it. Always a bit confused but excited to see what will happen next. And I like how diverse all your characters are...I look foward to reading more.

I like this chapter a lot better. Not that the the last three weren't good, just... this one flowed nicer. And I love how slow the slash is going! It's driving me crazy and I'm not bored, so highfives for you :D

Update? Happy Spring!

well, things are heating up aren't they? ^-^ I'm so glad, it's nice to see bits of the other side of Saber's personality, it's making him a really well rounded character. I'm a little confused as to what's going on, but that's probably because it's been a while since the last update and detective stories need to be followed in the details. It's alright though, I'm just going to toddle back now and re-read a few chapters so I remember the exact context of the whole Nathan Ray thing^-^ See ya next post!

really good story! lotsa humor, drama, angst and action!

Oh. Plot. And you STILL gave backstory! Or, at least hints. I like how you managed that. :)

I'm so glad you finally updated this! It's very interesting to see all the sides of Saber, and I love how Jack never listens to what he's told. I can't wait to see more of this ^_^

Dammit, I realise there's much more character introduction so far than actual story, but I'm so caught up in the Taurels that I'm really glad that they're taking first priority. The whole family dynamic there is great, I really hope you keep updating this, it's really barely begun and I honestly can't wait to see how things turn out...