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WonderWing 2008-12-09 . chapter 1
Whoah, sounds like me EVERY time I fall in love lol
A pretty simple poem, I mean it's pretty freakin Hallmark-card in its pure, warm statements. You really can't see this poem from a bad angle, or from too good of one, at that. I tell you what tho, this would make a REALLY good hallmark card lmao
Elphie Thropp 2007-03-30 . chapter 1
Beautiful! I love it!

The last lines are really good. Reputation is a difficult word to rhyme without it sounding choppy, but you did just that.

Keep it up!
dafodil-faerie 2007-02-16 . chapter 1
ah I know exactly how you feel and its soo painful ik
Great poem by the way!
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