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| Basara 2007-04-10 ch 1,  | abusebittersweet... well, sorryfor the situation there... nice... |
| angel953 2007-03-03 ch 1, | abuseYou know what...YOU STARTED THIS WHOLE THING! NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS WOULD I HAVE DIED FOR YOU! IF A BULLET WAS COMING STRAIGHT AT YOU I'D LAUGH AND RUN AWAY! |
| the unreal 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseIt's a great poem Caitlin, although i'm not commenting on the fact that its about liz, because im neutral in this. i like you writing as always... it reminds me of me =] |
| WhenShadowsBleed 2007-02-19 ch 1, | abusewell written and expressed. i havent read your writing in so long that i had almost forgotten how amazing it is. ... regardless, it is not the end. im not saying you shouldnt be hurt and upset, but just that you need to pull thru. life still goes on. this is the painful realization i have had to come to before, and i dont want you to hurt so much, and so badly for so long before you see this sick truth. i konw how it hurts to lose a friend, and i would do anything to take that pain away, but i can only help as much as you let me. please...it hurts to see you hurt. no matter what, i still love you. |
| Shookie Smiles Sweetly 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abusePowerful imagery. Don't worry, these wounds heal. Everyday you'll hurt a little less, then finally you'll find a confident who is twice as loyal, twice as fun, and makes you feel ten thousand times more amazing than any "Elizabeth" could ever have even hoped to make you feel. Look to the silver lining. --Shookie Smiles Sweetly |
| LovetheMadness 2007-02-17 ch 1, | abusei freakin loved it. seriously. |
| tears-of-redemption 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abuseDAMN wish I came up with this! its excatly how I feel when my bestie did that! |
| Robert Ryan 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abuseI really like this poem... and it reminds me oh too well of an old friend of mine. Very good, very depressing. |
| Travis C. Eckert 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abuseA great story about desertion and betrayal, even if it is real, good job with the poem. And it was quite scary. |
| xsariex 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abusethis is really good i like it so much |
| Princess-anna57 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abuseWell written. I'm really sorry to hear about this. :( Do try to be positive and write on! ~Anna~ ^_^ |