This is really well written and descriptive. The repetition of the number '4' kind of makes you start to understand why the character hates repetition so much. Very cleverly written.
Tata my crumpet.
~AlmightySocks

What a morbid, tantilzingly concise piece of work. It is insecurity, raw pain, and the greater social commentary rolled into one. It indiviualizes what is often a problem of greater society.
The only thing I don't like. Is the "Maybe I'm just tired of all this repetition."
Maybe? Maybe?
I'm pretty sure the "character" is tired, not maybe tired.

Hehe...I followed the link in your profile and found this stuff yesterday night. Then I got tired and went to sleep, and have just now got back to it when I'm about to go BACK to sleep.

So...I also recognize this story, heh...and somehow, without names, it's all the more intriguing and mysterious. Like why I'm writing a review that's trying to be serious at midnight when I'm as burned out as I am.

Anyway...like it, love Judgmental...110 chappies? U serial? Send me a mail if you want, perhaps you can persuade me to actually get an account here and start work on the fic about an emo vampire that I've been thinking about...

Oy, simply amazing. I loved it. And your descriptions are so good I got dizzy about the blood part in the end.