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sapphirekitten 2008-09-03 ch 36,	abuseAh, while I love it that Sirius is back, I also felt rather frustrated. I think you definitely need more Sirius/Alos action if that romance is going to go anywhere. And I've been wondering about this: if the people who helped wipe out the Sithous came from Kalemaso wouldn't they still be there, and if they are then wouldn't they have recognized Sirius right away? Anyways, it's apparent that Sirius isn't going to regain the use of his powers anytime soon which is kinda too bad. He was really cool with his ice powers. Well, I must be going now.^_^ Tootles. sapphirekitten
sapphirekitten 2008-09-03 ch 35,	abuseHi! Sorry this is so late. We went on a trip down to Georgia a while back and I've been having computer problems since we came back. I'll try to review for the next chapter and PM you as soon as I can. Now, the chick in this chapter...I don't know about her. Seems like she's got a bad attitude towards fighting in general. I suppose that's okay, but people who are like that usually end up making a big fuss over it sooner or later. But at least she has sense enough to be attracted to Senshi.--dreamy sigh-- And of course, I LOVE him to death!!XD I can't wait to see his face again after such a long time! If he wasn't so much older I'd offer to give him make-out lessons, too.;) Can't wait to see what happens next! Ttyl. sapphirekitten
wolfblood82 2008-08-31 ch 36,	abuseHeyo there! Moi again lol! :D Anyway, glad to see this one getting updated. :) Well, I can really say that this is an interesting chapter with the whole issue on the visions. They were rather well-described imo. I really wonder what will happen concerning this aspect and also, for some unknown reason, I think Silanidas is behind this. I really wonder about the issue of killing Sirius' clan. For once I've more or less forgotten about it and then, you brought back the issue. Now that you've said it in this chapter, I really, wonder exactly who was behind this. Maybe it's Silanidas, I don't know tbh. And the ending is a good one as well. Makes the reader wanting to know more. :)
Kuyeng13 2008-08-29 ch 36,	abuselarge eyes finally something with Sirius XD BIG sad eyes update again when you have time ya?
Koki Enwai 2008-08-29 ch 36,	abuseOoh, very nice. I like Ashei, but Solar's still my favorite. In the beginning, I didn't like Sirius that much, but now I really love him! Anyway, awesome chapter. I was so excited when I saw that you'd updated this. No concrit here; it's flawless, as usual. Can't wait for mroe! - Koki
wolfblood82 2008-08-11 ch 35,	abuseHeyo there! It's me again after such a long time! :) Sorry for the lateness though. I did went MIA here for quite some time. :S Anyway, before I start the review, I'll have to say that Senshi's identity could be one of the worst kept secrets you've ever done lol! :D Ok, now on with the review. Well, basically, I can only see this as a filler. I just don't know why, but I do sense a future romance between Senshi and Ashei. Anyway, if there's one thing I can say about Senshi here, it would be the fact that to a certain extent, he's an enigma. Also, the training scenes were very well done here. Anyway, glad to see you update this one. It's been a super long time since the last update. And yeah, I don't think I can review the other two updates now. Maybe tomorrow or so. Just hoping that I'll be finished reviewing your updates ASAP. :)
SageBernkastel 2008-07-28 ch 35,	abuseI really loved that last line. Anything can be made awesome by adding 'my **' to the end of it. Great work! I really can't wait to read more. (Ashei is my favorite now by the way~)
Koki Enwai 2008-07-27 ch 35,	abuseOh my -- !! It took all afternoon to read this, but I'm so glad that I did. It's incredible! You're such a talented writer! And while it does -- towards the beginning -- remind me a bit of Naruto, you really strayed from it and turned it into your own story. I admire you so much; your attention to detail is just, well, fantastic! The plot itself seems to be quite intricate and quite well done. I have to admit, my favorite characters are Solar and Nasua and the characters surrounding them. I also really like Alos and Athryn. Anyway, keep up the good work! I'll definitely be continuing to read and review this!! - Koki
FoxyWriter 2008-07-26 ch 35,	abuseI apologize deeply for being unable to read this sooner! I'm so happy - so so so happy ^_^. I loved this chapter; Mercury is so awesome - still my favorite character. Now that I draw and paint better I may actually be able to do a portrait worthy of his face. ^_^ I've said it a thousand times, and I will gladly say it a thousand times more. Your vocabulary is STUNNING.How it flows effortlessly is just so brilliant. I have and always will admire your use of such beautiful words intertwined in this divine story of yours. ^_^ If I'm to give any CC whatsoever, it's that some of the description was a bit long (sentence-wise) and my eyes tended to skip straight to dialogue. Not all the time, but some of the time. Don't take it too seriously though - most stories are like that. Maybe it's just me and my inability to read online for very long. :/ Whatever it is, it's not a bad thing - but sometimes using shorter sentences at various times (or omitting some) will give a more fluent effect that holds readers. Overall, this was a great read, and I adored the detail. (The scene with Senshi coughmercurycough practicing on the tree was so enticing and wonderfully written!) There aren't enough words to adequately explain how much I enjoyed reading your writing again. :) Keep it up and I am very much looking forward to the next chapter! ~ FoxyWriter
Lyn-san 2008-06-26 ch 25,	abuseO.o Romance! Dun-dun-dun! 'Sup? I'm back and I'm just dropping you a couple of lines... Nasua and Solar hugged (making progress, I see...) and Solar had a moment with a scorpion. Ok As for Silanidas... I fully agree with your author's note at the end. IN YOUR FACE SILANIDAS! Anyway, I'll try to review the next chapter later tonight. I enjoyed this one! That's all for now Lyn-san
Autumn Maiden 2008-05-16 ch 5,	abusewow r u really only 16 yrs old.well at least thats waht my maths equates ur age as.although i aint no maths wiz...ur stories are really wel written and the plot lines and story ideas are very well constructed ...one word..awsome-num...thanxz u for allowing ur stories to be read by me and othe rrandoms.hahah very good story =)
sapphirekitten 2008-05-12 ch 34,	abuseHmm, this is a good chapter. I like it that you made it a point to show that Alos isn't a weak little girl that screams on the sidelines. You know I hate those types. But anyways, why did the wind sound like Sirius? The way you put it, it sounded like the the wind had seduced her or something.-_-' I really wish that Athryn and Sirius had seen that display, though.--grins at the thought-- I would have loved to see the looks on their faces! Especially Sirius, who seems to look down on humans so much. But I'm all for girl power anyway, so rock on!XD Well, I gotta go. See ya next time! sapphirekitten
Lyn-san 2008-05-06 ch 24,	abuseHey it's me again! Now let's get to the review: Oh, Solar's been stung by a stinky ole scorpion! Mou... And those villagers... that LITTLE GIRL...! AARGH! (Suddenly, I feel the urge to sick Sephian on all of them) Anyway... SOLAR AND NASUA HAD ANOTHER FLUFFY MOMENT! KAWAII! Tarie vexed me again with her one-sided, ignorant comments. FLUFFY MOMENTS! YAY! And that's pretty much all I've gotta say on this one. It's interesting how the moon as such an effect on Solar now... Ah well. The only thing left to do is to move onwards to the next chapter! Until then, King of Kings! Lyn-san
Lyn-san 2008-05-04 ch 23,	abuse'Sup? That's right, I'm back with another review. Sorry for the long wait... First things first... WHAT IS IT WITH MOTHERS AND THEIR WHOLE 'I DON'T WANT YOU WITH THAT BOY, HE'S NOT GOOD ENOUGH FOR YOU' MENTALITY?!! Shessh! Really, I was very annoyed with Tarie at the beginning of this chapter. (She reminds me TOO much of my own mother.) ...Moving along... Ah! Was that a bit of fluff of between Solar and Nasua I saw just now? X3 They're so cute together! OMG. What's this? ... Solar is a mini Silanidas??! Sure doesn't seem that way. What the hell...? O.O ...So, it seems Silanidas still retains the ablilty to feel things other than anger. Interesting. Also, (in a very sadistic way) I enjoyed watching (er, reading) Zaphteh mess with Silanidas' head. What'd I really like to know is what Silanidas intends to do after he's destroyed the world. All in all, I enjoyed this chapter, and I look forward to the next one. I'll have to review that tomorrow though, as it's quite late and I have work in the morning. Ja ne!
wolfblood82 2008-04-14 ch 34,	abuseWell, glad to see you update finally. I thought you've gone MIA here indefinitely. :S Anyway, interesting chapter here concerning Alos. The whole chapter made me wonder if she will be a slave to some humongous power. Anyway, no CCs here from me since I sucks at that in general. But then again, I guess maybe you should have included Athryn and Sirius in her thoughts so as to diversify her development. Maybe you could have invoked some of her past memories of them and apply it here. This is one example of what I'm saying here. Apart from that, nothing much to say. Just glad to see you update here. And yeah, I'm starting on a new chapter of Elven Chronicles now. Just not sure when I'll finish it. :S

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