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angel953
2007-06-25
ch 1,
abusewow. i dont know what else to say other than we all feel like this at times...((yes even me))((lol))



c ya later y blah blah blah ur friend angel953
Princess-anna57
2007-04-19
ch 1,
abusePowerful poem. It asks questions I ask all the time. Well done. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^
tsarevich alexei
2007-03-27
ch 1,
abusedeeply sad material here, left me with a sort of echoing emptiness, an abyss of desperate questions.Very powerful. well done.
sin olvido
2007-02-25
ch 1,
abuseI like how you speak through the narrator, and if it's real, then I understand. This isn't my kind of poetry (which would be seepingly tragic archaicisms of things), but you really were speaking through this and I admire that.

~Christie
the unreal
2007-02-22
ch 1,
abusenice to see your poems again,
havent been on here for a while...
maybe because im trying to avoid writing
because i dont know whats going to come out?

well written, except the last line i dont undersatnd. did you write it wrong?

i suggest you come over on saturday or sunday (3 or 4th)
because i miss you!
Trisha
2007-02-19
ch 1, anon.
abuse** life's **, much rather live for my highs.

I'm chemically unbalanced, it sucks.

Wow, I don't know why I said that.
Travis C. Eckert
2007-02-17
ch 1,
abuseWow, if you do that I am almost certain she won't come back. Be open to her coming back. Good poem though.
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