"if I said your thorns didnt tear my flesh"
i love it.

I love the sense of repitition in here. Keep on writing :]

Hmm...definitely some imagery in this. The comparison between roses and thorns; that's a good description for such a poem. It was good, but the repetition at the end of each segment makes the poem feel sort of broken. Repetition is good, but such a powerful poem needs a bit more of the strong imagery you possessed at start. All in all, you're poem is a strong depiction. Great job, on the whole.

you know, i DID want to laugh reading this. HAHAHAHAH!
that was nice. thinking about it in real life was rly fun.
love.

That was really good. I loved the repetition and your choice of words and everything. I especially loved the line "(oh how i loathe you with all my hatred)".
Yeah, very good piece.