Reviews for che had a choice too

Kira's Song 2007-02-20 ch 1,	abuseIntriguing, quoth she Upon the reading of this Well-written haiku. Yeah, that about sums it up. :P
The Un-great-ful 2007-02-19 ch 1,	abuseInteresting. I don't suppose you wrote 17 beats as a reference to the number of syllables in a haiku, did you? Any way, unless i'm mistaken, there's only 16 here, but it isn't labelled as a haiku and I know you're talented, so maybe it isn't supposed to be one. In that case, what's the 17 for? (ooh) Alan.
DarkMoonRevenge 2007-02-18 ch 1,	abuseWonderful Poem, I really like it. I cant think of anything constructive to say (as I wouldn't change a thing about it), sorry. Thanks for the review on my poem, I'll keep the punctuation suggestion in mind. ~Kiro
Crivanea 2007-02-18 ch 1,	abusewow..haiku..i write a few haiku..but those i write sucks..this is..lol..u r very talented..i love this..although i'm a bit confused by the word seventeen beats//is there a reason for the number 17?..anyway..this reminded me of the execution of sudan..oh and thmx for ur suggestions..i always keep suggestions in mind..and sometimes i change them, but i rarely change things in fictionpress..becuase it takes too long to use the export and chapter replacement..once again..wonderful piece