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I love the last night! I agree with it!

Aww, that's sad :(

oh. Oops. :) My last review was just to the first chapter. Didn't see there were two. (i know- i'm lame).

I don't really like the second one.

You used ugly in every line.

This goes for all your writing- It would add more depth if you changed words around sometimes instead of repeating.

Just help maybe. I mean, I'm not better than you, definitely, just thinking.

But, okay yeah. Keep writing. [:

I like how you put in the second line.

I don't like the repetition of the question, though, sorry. Maybe if you just changed the wording the second time you asked it? That may leave it open to more changing (but who cares? I won't sweat the small stuff).

I really adore this poem. It's nice in a weird way.

Very true...very good...

Ouch...that's gotta hurt...

Um...never quite read anything like this before, so I'm gonna say good write and rock on! *makes peace sign*

BFQ