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Reviews For: Inhuman Expression
Elkhorn Buttons 2008-07-20 . chapter 1
Wow, that was really beautiful. I've been in this situation before also, except mine was questioning if I was with the right person. It's amazing the fine line of being full of pleasure, and absolute uncomfort.

VERY beautifully written.
BlackxXxRose 2008-01-11 . chapter 1
Amazing again. I can totally relate to it too cuz I've felt the same way. My boyfriend and I have gradually been going further and sometimes it just doesn't feel right. I love the line "Is that why goosebumps make constellations on your skin?" Beautiful imagery.
Puisin Topaz 2008-01-11 . chapter 1
I can relate to this in some ways. My girlfriend and I have been together for almost four months and we started going further than we have before. I got scared and backed off. I can sort of relate to this in some ways.
I enjoyed reading this. It was well written and I could feel the emotions you put into this. Keep writing, and thanks for reading my story. I'll continue posting.
BookFan06 2007-05-20 . chapter 1
Damn, this is good.
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