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| envirofriendlykrissooo 2008-08-08 ch 1,  | abuseOnce again, the things you write make me want to nod my head and mutter yes. (i'm a mutterer. haha) Especially the first four lines of this. This is written absolutely beautifully, I love the line "gentleness at these times is foolishness that will become a burden." (i'm not sure why, it becomes quite depressing if I start to think about it.) What I like best about this is the question. It's such a common proposition, and still the answer is different for everyone. I read it about four times, just to let it soak in. great job. |
| Roman C Lee 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseHmm, I liked this because it made me search for an inner meaning; I think I reread it like three times, and each time it meant something different to me ^_^ I don't think I interpreted the way you did when you wrote it, but that's the thing about poetry--it means something different to everybody. I read your poem out loud, and the word flowed beautifly, so *kudos* for that^_^ Anouther wonderful thing about poems is, you canwrite it any way you want! Could have a period here, a comma here, a new line there, and it's all correct!*_* And you spelled everything correctly so that's AWSOME :) |
| -insertsomethinguniquehere- 2007-05-15 ch 1, | abusethis poem is beautifully written. |
| cerberouszerog 2007-05-13 ch 1, | abuseamazing! 3 story reviews... I thought it was 1! XD 'Towards a wavering flame against the midnight blue' that line was amazing... the earlier line: 'The piercing dreams can be hidden from sight.' was my favorite! I also loved the ending. 'At the end of the journey, what will there be?' agh, I love this poem, it's just amazing! |
| writerwithoutacause 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abuseStrength is the proof that we all come to gaze upon. wow, I loved that line. You should definetley start a poetry c2 or something. |
| JezabelRomih 2007-03-01 ch 1, | abuseEstaba leyendo este poema y me venía música a la cabeza... es perfecto para una canción de Enya, no se por qué :) Es un poema melódico, en el sentido de que al leerlo sientes música... suena raro? :) Esa ha sido mi impresión... |
| PocoSnow15 2007-02-17 ch 1, | abuseWow, I got goosebumps! This was so beautifully written..wow... Great job! |