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| Darkday Chaos 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseShoot me open, but I can actually relate to this. Alot. Damn. The flow was grace itself and the rhymes were nice and anti-standard. I love "Off there goes my stupid brain/ Driving its own self insane". That my favorite line, but I loved every word. -DDC |
| Olivine 2007-02-17 ch 1, | abuseMy, my. This was a fantastic poem! Definitely how you could see the celebrities in Hollywood, or the "In" clique at school. And it's the kind of poem that you have to pay attention to. You can't just glance at it and get the message. I think you did a great job on this. Keep on writing --Ss. |