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Reviews For: Is This a Bad Heaven? Or a Better Hell?

nicnac100
2008-05-22
ch 2,
abuseHi I like your beginning of this story. I hope you complete it. I think it make good story. I like that she confict about God. I hope you work on this story in future.
MarkedBYMelinda
2007-06-12
ch 2,
abuseI really like this story! Keep going!
readergirl1
2007-06-10
ch 2, anon.
abuseI really like your sense of humor in your stories. Really digging your work.
MarkedBYMelinda
2007-06-08
ch 1,
abuseI like it...keep going! Really good!
Zzub Yearlight
2007-04-05
ch 2,
abuseWho were those guys? Is she ever gonna see them again and if so how will she thank them without having to "do the deed?" Great chapter. Please update soon*beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg*
mrskelley
2007-04-04
ch 2,
abuseInteresting so far!
soulmateyez
2007-02-19
ch 1, anon.
abusethat was really good and i can truly say i've never read a story quite like that and it was something I'll never forget. i like all the dark comedy that this girl uses even though she's been through so much and the people at her church are hypocrites because they jus finish callin her a whore then praising God for her life a second later. i'm really excited about this so keep it up!
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