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| tonicole 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abusewoah i like how i get a skin-crawling feeling from reading this...so. character got possessed ehh? |
| lordelfy 2007-03-08 ch 1, | abuseaww i like this!! i love track so i can relate! Good job in tying in everything, the transitions are wonderful! |
| the unreal 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abusewow. really good. it could use a little more though. i write short things, so i shoudnt be talking... |
| WhenShadowsBleed 2007-02-19 ch 1, | abusewow...kinda funny...i was reading, and felt i was there. its too short tho. kudos to you, to be able to suck me in in only 3 paragraphs. you should write a whole story. i really like you style, tho. truly amazing. there are those who write, those who write well, and those born with a pen in one hand, and a note pad in the other. keep up the good work! |
| Black and White Dreams 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseWhoa... that was kind of... creepy... You had good imagery here, even without a lot of discription. Really good job. ~Black and White Dreams~ |