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Reviews For: White Out Into The Underworld

tonicole
2007-03-18
ch 1,
abusewoah i like how i get a skin-crawling feeling from reading this...so. character got possessed ehh?
lordelfy
2007-03-08
ch 1,
abuseaww i like this!! i love track so i can relate! Good job in tying in everything, the transitions are wonderful!
the unreal
2007-02-23
ch 1,
abusewow. really good. it could use a little more though. i write short things, so i shoudnt be talking...
WhenShadowsBleed
2007-02-19
ch 1,
abusewow...kinda funny...i was reading, and felt i was there. its too short tho. kudos to you, to be able to suck me in in only 3 paragraphs. you should write a whole story. i really like you style, tho. truly amazing. there are those who write, those who write well, and those born with a pen in one hand, and a note pad in the other. keep up the good work!
Black and White Dreams
2007-02-18
ch 1,
abuseWhoa... that was kind of... creepy... You had good imagery here, even without a lot of discription. Really good job.

~Black and White Dreams~
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