Wow! This is incredible! Your flow is amazing and you almost brought me to tears! I love it when reading a poem can help me get more in touch with my religious side, and you helped me do that. Thank you! Definitely going on my favorite stories list!

Wow this was a brilliant poem! It actually brought tears to my eyes! It was that powerful!
So well done and well written. You get better with each piece!
Take care,
x[Vix]x