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| abba12 2007-07-28 ch 1,   | i loved the first two stanzas, not so much the second two. but i guess thats because the image changes in those two, and i like the first image better lol. the first two its a comforter, someone holding them as they weep at the end of it all when the person finally gives up. but in the second half she becomes like a captor to them. but the whole thing was very impacting, the first two moreso in my eyes. but as a whole i think ive found a second favourite :P |