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| angel953 2008-02-21 ch 1,  | abuseWOW! I know how this feels, and honestly i must agree I feel the same about these lines: "When I’m gone/No one cries" I think you are wrong about that though...which means I probably am too but oh well. Black and White Dreams and I would both cry our eyes out lol. Really nice work here. oh and btw, i think sometimes you are a bit lenient with your ratings so you might wanna be careful of that. ~angel953 |
| Black and White Dreams 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseYeah, I know what you mean here. Good job with this. I really like the first stanza. ~Black and White Dreams~ |
| Travis C. Eckert 2007-02-17 ch 1, | abuseA huge BURN! at the end of this. Really a good poem of not putting up with anything anymore. |