No electricity

Warms the body

But one candle alone

Give thy eyes warmness once unknown :)

Lovely poem. The above is just a suggestion. I like the inspiration :)

Haha. That's exactly the same way I feel with alot of the poetry here. You hit the nail on the head and I'm glad you reviewed and noticed that. Thank you very much. I enjoyed reading your work of art as well. It's thought provoking because I know it means something but aren't sure if it's the intended meaning :p . But I guess it'll mean something different for everyone. Great work.