Reviews for Freefall
Aquafied 2/19/07 . chapter 1
it was miserable today

it makes me miserable

that should not be healthy

rain bleeding...similar to a bleeding nation
eldrin 2/19/07 . chapter 1
Love "bleeding rain." What a wonderful piece!
Basara 2/19/07 . chapter 1
wow, the ecosystem indeed... in a new style of decripting it...

nice...
a silenced revolution 2/18/07 . chapter 1
Quite interesting. I like the concept of "bleeding rain". Good haiku.
On My Way Out 2/18/07 . chapter 1
you make me jealous whenever i read anything you write.

omce again, beautiful imagery; especially love the phrases "bleeding rain" and "earthly connections"

titale is perfect for this haiku

wonderful job on this one!