|Reviews for Freefall|
| Aquafied 2/19/07 . chapter 1
it was miserable today
it makes me miserable
that should not be healthy
rain bleeding...similar to a bleeding nation
| eldrin 2/19/07 . chapter 1
Love "bleeding rain." What a wonderful piece!
| Basara 2/19/07 . chapter 1
wow, the ecosystem indeed... in a new style of decripting it...
| a silenced revolution 2/18/07 . chapter 1
Quite interesting. I like the concept of "bleeding rain". Good haiku.
| On My Way Out 2/18/07 . chapter 1
you make me jealous whenever i read anything you write.
omce again, beautiful imagery; especially love the phrases "bleeding rain" and "earthly connections"
titale is perfect for this haiku
wonderful job on this one!