| Reviews for Freefall |
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Aquafied 2/19/07 . chapter 1it was miserable today it makes me miserable that should not be healthy rain bleeding...similar to a bleeding nation |
eldrin 2/19/07 . chapter 1Love "bleeding rain." What a wonderful piece! |
Basara 2/19/07 . chapter 1wow, the ecosystem indeed... in a new style of decripting it... nice... |
a silenced revolution 2/18/07 . chapter 1Quite interesting. I like the concept of "bleeding rain". Good haiku. |
On My Way Out 2/18/07 . chapter 1 you make me jealous whenever i read anything you write. omce again, beautiful imagery; especially love the phrases "bleeding rain" and "earthly connections" titale is perfect for this haiku wonderful job on this one! |