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| angel953 2007-08-05 ch 1,  | abusethis is really good i can almost feel the emotions pouring off the page |
| Travis C. Eckert 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseTowards the beginning I see someone just on a bad path and then you follow with them, but maybe not in the negative light. I am not going to try to relate to this, because I don't. Good job. |
| Black and White Dreams 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuse"I fell because you tripped me Then held out your hand So that you could lift me" I can relate to those lines so well. Really great job with this. ~Black and White Dreams~ |