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| PrincessPeaches 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is so so so so so so so true! love it! |
| fusillade 2007-04-14 ch 1, | abuseThe idea is cute, however, it's not written that well. Many unnecessary words and puncuation and an inconsistent rhythm are the main problems, I think. Edit those and the poem should be fine. |
| MikaelaBanes 2007-03-16 ch 1, | abusegreat poem! ^_^ |
| 1234321 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good. My friends are like relaxer :) I can't wait until you post your next poam, "Friends are like shoes" |
| -MyInspiration- 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseI really liked it. The comaprisons and similes were very cute, and so true. You have a knack for comparing things that wouls never seem to be alike but you make them so. Good job. :) |
| RADiOCiTYROCKETTE 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseHaha, I like it, it's cute |