This is almost scary. I like it - but it makes me uneasy. I love when poems include eye color...it adds detail. I think the last two lines are the best - they leave it open for interpretation.

theres so much imagry and interpretations that go with this poem


I feel like the girl, or i think its a girl, thats descrbing the scence had an affair with this guy and he wasnt expecting to see her at this big fancy party place. At least thats what i see. I really like it alot

M... almost sounds like murder.

this is really good. the 2nd half is better i think; the metaphors are lovely, really good.