very well written and intruiging (i think i spelt that wrong). a few words of advice though, you should try to make it more in-depth in the person's thought and try to get it so they stick to one problem at a time. nice (short) first chapeter. Srry for all of the spelling errors.

love, FyreFly8

oh, good! :D Skirts with Leggings. THANK YOU! Finally! Just like those pants that were just square patches. Dang. lol. This was great. Poor girl. Reminds me of somethign that would be in a V. C. Andrews novel. ;D haha. That bastard, he should have his dick cut off. ...sorry 'bout that, I just got a little angry. heh. :D I hope you update soon.

I've got a step-dad story, but it's not anything like this. :) Can;t wait to see what happens next. *waves* bye bye!

Seriously powerful. Not much more to say.

wow. this sounds like it's going to be way way GOOD.

"like a growing trend similar to hula-hoops or skirts with leggings." that line made me smile =]

update soon... i know i sure haven't :/