Reviews for A Day at a Time: Haikus of a Student

ham337dd 2007-04-24 ch 1,	abuseGreat poems! They're well-written, cute, and entertaining!
Basara 2007-02-25 ch 5,	abusea small diary of life's major events... well, some part are sweet and other's are saddening... come to think of it. it's very normal to feel and expirience something... nice...
water lily nymph 2007-02-21 ch 3,	abusei love the math one the best. "i hate math and it hates me" too true. only, i wish in the line where you said "except for in her" you said instead "except for her smile" or something similar - it would imply that you pay attention to sweet details like that, rather than just saying she's hot overall. :)
water lily nymph 2007-02-21 ch 2,	abuse"i studied her instead." hehe - it reminds me of how i took anatomy and physiology last year. never, take that class. it also reminds me of how yesterday in art i stole a picture of James Franco that the teacher had laminated in the 'pictures you can pick from' bin. it's now in my locker. this is just so clever.
water lily nymph 2007-02-21 ch 1,	abusewow, this is so creatively awesome! hehe, I love the haiku about needing a sponge bath for dirty thoughts.
shesingsherheart 2007-02-20 ch 3,	abuseI love this idea of a haiku a day. I really liked the one with the ending line "God will not miss me" by far the best one. I also like the theme of this girl Alexa...altho it does sound a bit obsessive thats what I like about it. Some of them are a bit to simple but for the most part they are very interesting. Keep working on it!