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| Chidori Nadare 2007-07-05 ch 1,  | abuseThat's quite disturbing and literal. I like this. Good job. -C.N |
| Neutral Base 2007-04-06 ch 1, | abuseum...wow...that's very disturbing...and literal. I am amaze that something that gruesome could come from your brain...it's god just disturbing... |
| ThePoetMan 2007-02-26 ch 1, | abusethats kinda weird but i like it its a good poem poems that just come to u are often the best if u get them down in time |
| mizu no kokoro 2007-02-26 ch 1, | abuselol, reminds me of a songXD and the description is rather, grusome =P but good work keep writing! |
| paradiie 2007-02-25 ch 1, | abuseI think this really good. I like the feminism in it:) |
| Hidden Sword of Truth 2007-02-21 ch 1, | abuseIt isn't all that gross I mean there is a song called "man Eater" or something like that. I like it though! Best Wishes! |
| burning in effigy 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abusewhoa. creepy.. but i like the imagery and detail you go into to describe the "man eater" "She collects the tattoos like you would stamps/The hearts are put away in an old shoe box" my favorite lines :) |