That's quite disturbing and literal. I like this. Good job.


-C.N

um...wow...that's very disturbing...and literal. I am amaze that something that gruesome could come from your brain...it's god just disturbing...

thats kinda weird but i like it its a good poem
poems that just come to u are often the best if u get them down in time

lol, reminds me of a songXD and the description is rather, grusome =P but good work

keep writing!

I think this really good. I like the feminism in it:)

It isn't all that gross I mean there is a song called "man Eater" or something like that. I like it though!


Best Wishes!

whoa. creepy.. but i like the imagery and detail you go into to describe the "man eater"

"She collects the tattoos like you would stamps/The hearts are put away in an old shoe box" my favorite lines :)