this was a really interesting story. beautifully written. as much as i like happy endings this ending was appropriate and fitting for the situation presented. becky would make a great main character for a longer story when she's older and more mature. i think she would be really fascinating to read more about

Aw, bless Becky!

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I'm glad it didn't end with some sappy ending (as much as I do love them).
That she'd just be there for him, waiting for him to come back.

And that made it a whole lot better.

Beautifully written.

kthnxbai,

Martin the Waterskier

Huh..well, I'm not so sure about how I felt with this piece. It was..interesting. There was a lot of emotion, and Becky changed her mind a lot, really fast. It was excellently written though. Pretty good job.

So.. I wasn't quite sure what my opinion and impression was at the end of the story. The emotions it provoked were kind of mixed up and complicated. Which is not necessarily a bad thing ;)
I really like the way you wrote it, and you've connected the lyrics and prose nicely, and I liked the overall flow very much.
I just somehow couldn't cope best with the general idea, hahah. But I tend to expect happy endings, and this story wasn't the usual cliché, which is also a plus.
But since I feel I'll just confuse you even more if I try to explain what the hell I'm saying, I'm not going to.
Let's just say, well done and... accepted to The List :p

Wow that was a great one shot.

this one didn't piss me off the other story, it was really god even if the mood of this story wasn't happy

Wow, that was so creative and touching. You're a great writer, keep it up!

Great great work once more. Can't wait to read the other ones!

Kind of cheesy but in a realistic teenage-girl's-thoughts way. It's different too, not the usual run of the mill cliche' and it fits the lyrics really well.

Ah, what a sweet ending despite the fact that Mark left her.