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| Jessie Dee 2007-02-27 ch 1, | Gorgeous. There are simply no more words I can possibly use to describe this. |
| EnigmaticArsenic 2007-02-19 ch 1, | ha- now that is an interesting interpretation, but her reason was wonderfully put, and the ending completely divine. |
| Circus 2007-02-19 ch 1, | Great! Beautiful description, every image and color fitting perfectly into the theme of the sea. The repeated phrase is a very good tying motif. Also, "tintinnabulation"! The best word in the English language, used sweetly to describe a laugh, with a lovely continued bell theme. I really like this; very well done! Thank you for writing. |
| Madame de Astolat 2007-02-18 ch 1, | Perfectly lovely. It was like a song. |