Gorgeous. There are simply no more words I can possibly use to describe this.

ha- now that is an interesting interpretation, but her reason was wonderfully put, and the ending completely divine.

Great! Beautiful description, every image and color fitting perfectly into the theme of the sea. The repeated phrase is a very good tying motif. Also, "tintinnabulation"! The best word in the English language, used sweetly to describe a laugh, with a lovely continued bell theme. I really like this; very well done! Thank you for writing.

Perfectly lovely. It was like a song.