I don't know if I liked it or not. It was vague... which made it interesting but I felt a bit of the dialog was a bit unrealistic. I like the end though. =]

Cute little one shot. The intro was very vague, but I suspect you did that on purpose. Nice dialogue, nicer ending. Caught me off guard, it did... Anyway, have some cow juice.

Good work and keep writing!

-Bleep

okay, you cant leave me hanging like this, actually i guess you can, it's your one-shot but I'm interested.. well, great job.

Very Well done, i kind of had a conversation similar to that with my friend Chris. OH and i loved the ending. *adds to favorites*