I like it! When I first saw the title, I thought it would be about the twisted Yellow Rose plot in MUST LOVE DOGS (pretty good move) The point of that plot was that a girl was going to meet her online date who would have a single yellow rose, but he turned out to be her father! (oops, spoiler) Anyway, I enjoyed the poem, very full of imagery and feelings.

Very good. At the beginning it seemed happy and all of a sudden it's sad. Like walking into the gym and then realizing it's the wrong day.

Oh, that was really sad. :( But you portrayed the sorrow well. Every year when a "death anniversary" rolls around, the people close to the deceased always feel it again. I hope you feel better.

Don't get mad at me, but there's another typo: "Until there is noting left of you", it should be "nothing".

Well that's it. Keep writing!