|Reviews for The Beating of a Lifetime|
| His Mercy's Waiting 2/19/07 . chapter 1
Good imagery and emotion in this.
"The bruise forms form his hand"
| Cobalt65 2/18/07 . chapter 1
You decribed exactly how you felt, my girlfriend went through something like this, multiple times, everything in this poem says everything she has said to me about it. I listened to her dreams sometimes, not good.
This is perfect, dont change it, not one bit.