I like it. It's idealistic to the extreme, but very sweet.

Awe, I love this so much because he made her sound so beautiful even though the explanations are not of comtemperary beauty. Great writing. :D

Adorable in all sorts of ways. I say D . Petrelli should keep writing. I loved how nervous he was and was super glad when he made that final step, it really defined him as a character. Just Lovely.

you know what??
this is by far the best oneshot i have had the normous fortune to read.
wanna noe why??
its different.
D Petrelli, keep writing. i love it.