is this about making up after disagreeing, arguing and getting angry with each other or is it about being friends in spite of all the differences, ups and downs, etc...? Thanks for sharing and keep writing!

i just love this.
i had no idea why you put it into angst genre, but the last lines does tell about how there was no more thing to share again. like someday later we'll run out of things to be shared. and i guess those laughters will stop?
well i don't know. i just love this. good stuff. rly!

wow. that's good.
it hides as cute... disguising lilts of sadness and pain.
i love it!

i have to mention first of all, i think the title is absolutely gorgeous.
& this poem is just so sweet & innocent, its brilliant. i lvoe the story of it & its flows nicely. thanks for the review ~Bex xx

Aw. So cute. I love the little-kid-ness of it. And how the tone seems to hold this saddness to it-- as if you wish you could go back to that time when you shared everything and laughed together, but you can't ever go back. Anyway, very pretty. I like it.

aw sweet!

That's so cute and... wow. It made me think of when I was little and I used to steal bits of food from my friend because I always had terrible lunches. Then I started getting pre-ordered meals that always came with a little goody, and I usually gave my friend the goody in exchange for cheese. This is a great poem, very cute and pretty. I like how you made it flow and how you told a story but made it beautiful at the same time. Great job.