This wasn't very good at all.

There were some very noticeable grammatical errors. At one part, you said 'her' instead of 'he' when referring to Vasilii. Half way through the story, you changed the spelling of his name.

It was somewhat twisted, sure. But it wasn't hot. That's disgusting. You obviously have something wrong with you, which isn't bad.

i...i...theres...no words. no ** words to describe how creepy and amazing that whole thing was. omg, that was just so sick and deliciously wrong. Sigh. i must read again...

Yeah. I had only one thought while reading this.

What. The. **.

Hahaha...

OMFG!

That was ** intense! It was so morbid! What the hell!?

It was hot, and really funny and interesting. I'm looking forward to more!!

man, that was a twisted story. i totally did not expect that ending! i've read your other story, 'cole turns to ash' and i must add that you are very good at keeping the readers guessing! i feel so bad for vasili! why do the good ones have to be dead or gay! or in this case, dead, gay, and imaginary?!

O_o Um...wow. I loved it XD Beautiful Vasilissa is probably my favourite fairytale, so it was a lot of fun to read another version of it. I can honestly say, I wasn't expecting any of it to turn out that way... I hope you eventually do more of these!!

WOW i love ur storys this one was kinda gross with the eatting and stuff but really god! weird ending lol he just dies =C!

...that was...hot. But Avel is probably gunna give me nightmares tonight. But seriously...HE DIES?!?! Just like...falls down and dies?! Oh great spirit...

Oh, and what is the real story, 'cause I'd really like to read it. Thx!

ERM HANG ON?!

HE DIES?

JUST LIKE THAT?

oh lordy lord.

HAHAHAAHAH! U FU-CKING LOONY!

** WAS I SHOCKED WEN HE STARTED EATING THE GUYS FRICKEN HAND.UGH MAN UR MAD!

MAD I TELL YOU!

That was so weird. But in a good way! ;D It is definately not like the original, although I love both. The ending was pretty abrupt and seems sort of rushed though. But I like it. I hope to see another story soon.

Oh dear.. That was hot. I never knew cannibalism could be hot. Usually cannibalism freaks the heck out of me but man.. that was really hot >_

Oh my God!
Dude, you made me vomit!
But other than the arm things, I loved this story.
I...oh my God. It just...oh, Jesus.

Checking to see if someone can review twice while anonymous.

By the by, **.

You've got a lot of spelling mistakes.

You damn cow.

YOU SUCK AT WRITING!

Hot. Strange, but hot.