|Reviews for Clouds|
| Panchromatic 3/7/08 . chapter 1
I love the characters and the whole cloud motif. That was unique. :)
| SMTS 6/8/07 . chapter 1
Adorable and very enjoyable.
| Amari 3/23/07 . chapter 1
I don't really know how to say this kindly. It could have a good idea behind it, but it lacks something that has the reader wanting more. It didn't even seem like a prologue, but like it was supposed to be that...alludingly blank. Keep at it a bit more, and it could be decent, but it seems too much like what those of us at would call a Mary-Sue fic.