I love the characters and the whole cloud motif. That was unique. :)

Adorable and very enjoyable.

K3k

I don't really know how to say this kindly. It could have a good idea behind it, but it lacks something that has the reader wanting more. It didn't even seem like a prologue, but like it was supposed to be that...alludingly blank. Keep at it a bit more, and it could be decent, but it seems too much like what those of us at would call a Mary-Sue fic.

remaining Amari