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| angel953 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is pretty good. It could use a spell check though. I can relate to this piece well. Nice job. ~angel953 |
| Ziren 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuseOh so true, Sam, and that's all there is to it. Kudos. |
| Black and White Dreams 2007-02-21 ch 1, | abuseI like how you repeat the lines "I don’t understand Even I don’t understand". The rhyming flows. Good job with this. ~Black and White Dreams~ |
| Travis C. Eckert 2007-02-19 ch 1, | abuseGood rhyming here and I am really liking your work. Please R&R me too please. |