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Reviews For: Breaking Down Again

angel953
2008-02-21
ch 1,
abuseThis is pretty good. It could use a spell check though. I can relate to this piece well. Nice job.


~angel953
Ziren
2007-02-28
ch 1,
abuseOh so true, Sam, and that's all there is to it. Kudos.
Black and White Dreams
2007-02-21
ch 1,
abuseI like how you repeat the lines

"I don’t understand

Even I don’t understand".

The rhyming flows. Good job with this.

~Black and White Dreams~
Travis C. Eckert
2007-02-19
ch 1,
abuseGood rhyming here and I am really liking your work. Please R&R me too please.
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