I can't put this book down.

wow

im speechless this is amazing

Wow, it's amazing. It creates a vivid image while reading. Your very good so keep writing

I love the lines

"Smeared on the concrete

By the rain of reality,"

Great job, keep writing!

:Isabella May:

hey sam, so this was pretty much amazing. all there is to it. _

*Pix

hey.

im black and white dreams's friend kate.

this was such a good poem i dont know what to say to it..great job.

I just imagine a person yelling this entire thing if they were to read this. And it rhymed a lot, good job.

This left me in complete awe. The imagery in this is breath-taking. Strong emotions. Adding to favorites and C2.