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| angel953 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abusewow im speechless this is amazing |
| XShadowxWolfx32X 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuseWow, it's amazing. It creates a vivid image while reading. Your very good so keep writing |
| perpetual questions 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abuseI love the lines "Smeared on the concrete By the rain of reality," Great job, keep writing! ~:Isabella May:~ |
| VELVETxKISSES 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abusehey sam, so this was pretty much amazing. all there is to it. ^_^ ~*Pix |
| the unreal 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abusehey. im black and white dreams's friend kate. this was such a good poem i dont know what to say to it..great job. |
| Travis C. Eckert 2007-02-19 ch 1, | abuseI just imagine a person yelling this entire thing if they were to read this. And it rhymed a lot, good job. |
| Black and White Dreams 2007-02-19 ch 1, | abuseThis left me in complete awe. The imagery in this is breath-taking. Strong emotions. Adding to favorites and C2. |