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| The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon 2008-03-03 ch 5,  | abuseI liked these chapters much more! Even though you introduced a ton more characters, you did so in a way that let me figure it out slowly. Write on! Pen.Dragon PS: Just so you know, "Artemis" is the name of the greek goddess of the hunt. It's a girl's name. |
| The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon 2008-02-26 ch 3, | abuseI liked it, but I am kinda confused at this point (hopefully I won't be after I read on). What happened to her father? Write on! Pen.Dragon |
| Efirnda McDannak 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseThis seriously made me laugh. I think all fantasy writers that have dragons in their story should read Rule 1, at the very least! Good thoughts, and I hope to see more rules to follow these two! :) --E.M. |
| Eric-san 2007-07-24 ch 9, | abuseLoved the story. Just a few spelled/grammar mistakes like: " I rapped it all up" in chapter five. And just wondering, is chapter 9 supposed to be called 'chapter 9'? |
| miss.ex.everything 2007-07-21 ch 9, | abuseYour story is very good, but I think everything happens kind of abruptly. Like, whenever there is any action, it's just like BAM action. Then its over. But I do like how you change POV's. |
| Carmel March 2007-07-12 ch 9, | abuseThis is such a great story. I love the cleverness of the plot and the well-portrayed characters. Excellent job, and I can't wait for more! ~carm~ |
| Inko321 2007-07-07 ch 3, | abuseOoh! Who-or what- is the rat? Why is it there? Could it be one of theose kids? Great! |
| Inko321 2007-07-07 ch 2, | abuseI like the main character already! I only wish I knew her name. Then again, I guess that's why there's another chapter.^__^ |
| Inko321 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseHeh heh...low lifes. I like it already, and I did was read the general rules. Good job! I'm going to read the next chapter! |
| Litty122 2007-07-07 ch 9, | abuseyay! a new chapter! :D |
| Litty122 2007-05-07 ch 8, | abuseGreat chapter :] I loved the "rock, parchment, knife" line ^^ anyways, keep it up! :D |
| Litty122 2007-05-07 ch 5, | abuseInteresting chapter. Can't wait to see what happens :D |
| Litty122 2007-05-07 ch 4, | abusegreat chapter :] can't wait to see what happens. Keep it up! |
| Captain Lucky 2007-05-04 ch 8, | abuseOK, first off, I am so sorry it took me so long to review. I won't bore you with excuses. Anyway, though, I have been reading your story and I'm really excited to see what happens and what is happening - why are the kids where they are, why are they looking for dragons, etc. I think you've got something good going here, so I'll be watching for more! =) CL |
| Ciara Lixue 2007-03-20 ch 7, | abuse*gasp* This is so cool! I like how you write the POV, its quite commical. Keep writing! :) |