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| dontneedyou 2008-07-24 ch 16,  | abuseOmygosh, I really love this storyy! Please update son! Or I'll be forced to hurt you. =P Haha, no, I'm kidding, but seriously, update soon? Pwweease? =] |
| amaryllisfaye 2008-07-12 ch 16, | abusei love this..evan and ava are so meant for each other! lol please dont give up on this story...it really does light up my day :) |
| Shadowe Goddess 2008-07-09 ch 16, | abuseOhohoh! Please update! |
| AkunamattataTM 2008-06-07 ch 16, | abusewhy dont you ever update?! |
| Ambergirl1029 2008-06-02 ch 16, | abuseuh oh, didn't see that one coming. continuing i am proud to say that this story has entertained me made me laugh not cry don't worry lol this story has left me wanting more but i must mention one thing in one of Evans POV's his mother calls him Hunter Dear and i find that a bit confusing considering its his mother one thing that caught me completely off guard what when hunter tells Avy-poo as Evan lives to call her that he made Aly that she was pregnant i got confused but when i finally understood it it made me angry how the hell is she going to know whether she's pregnant in what two/three days it takes usually about a week right? and then you don't know for sure whether it will live till about three months because thats when you find out if its strong enough i don't know the details but i do know that ... anyways i cant wait till your next chapter i want to know whether she looses her virginity to "sweet *ahem* innocent Evan *Ahem*" yeah so keep me posted okay? Sweet Addiction: Just One Touch, Addict Amber |
| Ambergirl1029 2008-06-02 ch 9, | abusethis is so funny i love this story so far cant wait to see what happens Amber |
| Ambergirl1029 2008-06-02 ch 8, | abuselove it |
| WriterGurl123 2008-05-10 ch 16, | abuseWow! I just hope that she doesn't get pregnant. Post More Soon! |
| Brittany 2008-05-05 ch 16, anon. | abuseI flipping love this story!It's the bomb.Keep updating,PLEASE! |
| Sweetly Sarcastic 2008-05-04 ch 16, | abusewow that was quite a transition... good chapter, though- please update soon so i find out how far they actually go! |
| beingmyself 2008-04-27 ch 16, | abuseOh, the suspense is killing me! |
| lilhelplessaznwithabigheart 2008-04-23 ch 16, | abuseOMG! ava lost her virginity with him already? wow, tat was faster tehm i thought! lols...its ok tat it was short, just as long as u don't leave me here wondering how its supposed to end. lols thnx for updating it though! looking foward to the new chapter... |
| sweetnothings.x 2008-04-20 ch 16, | abuse=O No way mann Ava's going to lose the big V?!! To Evan!? A! ...Oerr... Gossh, I've waited so long for this chapter and it's deffo better than nothing! X] Hope to be seeing an update soon =] A devoted fan of this fic, Kim =) |
| Lady of Confusion 2008-04-18 ch 16, | abuseupdate soon! |
| hnjones-2009 2008-04-17 ch 16, | abuseFirst note: This is a reminder, not a threat. You better have the next chapter up in less than a week or else I will make you cry... But! I will be crying with you, because I cannot wait to find out what is going to happen with Ms. Ava and Mr. Hunk (hehe). I may sound a little retro saying this, but I totally dig the sweet theme. It adds to her innocence and it makes me giggle. But other than this totally random comment, I just wanted to encourage you to keep writing, especially this story. So... PUH-WEASE?!¿!¿!¿!?i?i?i¿!¿!¿! |