Wow, I read your Trigun fic with the Meryl seeing the light in the desert and I really really liked it and I decided to read this and WOW! This is a really great short story. I think that it is really nicely written and beautifully done. You are a great writer keep it up.

God Damn... This was WONDERFUL! So well written, so clean to read! It wasn't confusing, or contrite, or even slightly unmotivated. This was very touching!

amazing. wow. i liked the vingettes of the bus riders lives, it gave me some real inisght. please, keep writing.

that..was.. amazing. you have such a passion for writing.

I love it!! I do that a lot too--it aides in developing characters for future pieces. I'll be interested to read more of your stories as they come.