so, Jasmine, my dear, I decided that I very much needed to catch up on your lovely fiction writings. Thus, here I am!

and really... lol!

I really like the ending. It's very deep, in a roundabout sort of way.

Ha ha.

Is someone else out there as cynical as me?

I love it. Finally, somebody else who wonders what all these obsessive pre-pubescent girls are so interested in. So, as you can see, I pretty much love the idea.

But I also like the gradual change from complete infatuation ('cos that ain't love) to a sort of disappointment - I don't know, I think the ending's open to interpretation.

The season theme is a great idea - ties the whole thing together well.

The best thing about this story, second perhaps to the idea? The summary and introduction. Summary: short, sweet and got my attention more than well. The introduction: not quite so great, but you can't really go with something so short, can you?

"I’m trying to be deep and ** but I dunno if it’s really coming out right."

Best part, hands down.

Besides the fact that I could figure out if it was about Panic! At The Disco...the voice is awesome.