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sfh09
2008-06-18
ch 1,
abuseI understand, probably all too well. A similar thing happened to me freshman year--a guy in my class committed suicide, which of course led me to think about death. And I came to pretty much the same place as you did.

So, I love this because it's very well written. But more so because you just showed me that I'm not alone.
Moonhowler0-0
2007-02-24
ch 1,
abuseI used to fear death myself, until I realized that death is a part of life and it is inevitable. No-one can escape it. My biggest fear is heights and losing more of my loved ones (not to death, but other things). Last school year, one of our fellow students got into a car crash,went into a coma and died. At that moment, I too realized that death could come at anytime, so I must make the most of my life. Death is a good motivator to live out your life, I think.

Enough of the rant. Good essay.
Taltush/MeiMei
2007-02-19
ch 1,
abuseI'm not really sure what to say, because it seems like this is actually you and your life, but I just want to say that the way this is written is amazing. It's beautiful and sad, and just... wow.
Hi8 Tapes
2007-02-19
ch 1,
abuseTo me it's a good essay, but I have no idea how it would work as a monlogue.

But maybe that's just me.
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