o, it's been so long since you updated, I'm gonna start from scratch at the beginning. Be prepared. It might take me awhile but I'll review. :)

aw, poor rory

1st off all, apologies for not writing last night! i took a pain killer and then it was off to dream land a bit easrlier than i wanted to go...

anyways, looks like you're getting more and more scandolous! ari betting gavin she was better in bed was unexpected and made for an interesting exchange.

poor rory! my heart broke for him at the end of the chapter! he needs to grow some you-know-whats and get back at adrian. i just want to give the poor kid a hug and bring him some more brownies.

i liked the discussion about ring shopping :) DJ and caitlin seem like a cute couple. could there be a wedding later in the book??

thats all for now, typing with one hand is not easy! but, i hope this review will suffice.

love!

aww poor Rory. =) you've got a bunch of interesting characters in this story. I like it a lot =) so update soon!

~ Aria

Poor Rory! he needs a hug, and some more brownies. im not sure what to say about the rest of them, but rory needs a hug! how could you do that to him? youre a horrible person sometimes. anywho, great chapter, write another before you cant anymore.

good chapter it made me laugh! I think I need to re-read it again soon though I keep forgetting who is who in the story. its not confusing its just that I'm sleepy and remembering characters when I'm sleepy is just hard, so yeah. I liked the part about with Adrian in a towel and I liked the part about the brownies! anyways I look forward to reading more... hehehhe! I heart you. bye bye

I love you! You make my life so much happier! Wish you could have heard me giggling and exclaiming that's hot! It would have made you laugh and shake your head! I love this book! Gavin makes me laugh the most. His flirting and comments are the funniest. Him telling Ari that he'd totally do her! Great! Them discussing Adrian, funny! And poor Rory, him not telling Adrian that it was not ok for him to go out with Ari, but that's works out well for me. I'll just go make him some brownies or chocolate cupcakes and then he can fall in love with me! :) (sigh) I heart that man! He is too adorable! And he's a writer! I must say you create the funniest characters and the hottest guys, and the craziest situations! I will say it again, I love you! Thanks for cheering me up! :) You can have Dj back now, but I'm keeping Rory til tomorrow! ;) teehee I hope you can finish another chapter before you off and leave us hanging! :( I don't know how I'll survive the summer? Maybe I'll have to start rereading! You deserve some kind of chocolate for a job extraordinaryly well done! I'll let you choose . . .

i would like to simply point out that i keep forgetting what is going on and who everyone is because its so damned long between posts. work on that. love the characters. gavin is you...didn't know you were a gay guy. he is maybe seeming a bit too cute. when i think of stereotypical gay i think of flamboyant with an attitude. adrian is a bit closer to the mark actually. i should try to intro you to dan this summer so you have a gay guy to study...that is if he ever comes back from the dead.

*squees* I love the direction that this is taking. I sense some ridiculous plot twists ahead.

Well, the first thing that flashes through my mind is: Poor Rory. Lol, he's like being thrown aside by everyone, and all the attention is on Adrian. My my, Adrian is getting more and more popular xD

Looks like there's going to be a love square soon ♥

love,

~carbons

First of all, you are too cute! I just read what you wrote in response to my last review! Yes, you can be studious when you want to be! I shall miss yelling at you! :) Now as for the story. You are too brillant for words! One of these days I shall run out of words to describe your brilliance! I am so happy that I was able to find my internet so I could read this fabulous chapter! It was playing hide and seek and it almost won, but I vanquished it after an hour and a half! So here I am filling the void in my soul caused by your absence. :'( Gavin is as fabulous as Jack. He is so flurtatious. I love him. The whole scene with the hand was great! I love the line, "I can break this hand just as easily." I could have used DJ today after all the yard work I did today! I need a widower with kids who can massage and hunt. ;) It's kind of funny the way everyone always picks on Rory! The poor guy! Ok, so I can't stop laughing! I LOVED the beginning of the Birthday party scene when the two brothers arrived. The whole full name introductions and fight!! HOT! I wish Rory could my widower! I know that sounds horible, but that would be your fault my dear! Turning me heartless little by little! :) That was a beautiful ending to a glorious chapter! (sigh) I'm in love with this book! Please write more! Pretty please with a cherry on top! (this is me sticking my bottom lip out begging you!!) You did say that you would try not to be too long with the next chapter. Could you try a little harder! But if not, I'll love you anyways! ;) Cheers!

i insist that Gavin find a boyfriend before the novel is through. poor thing. so lonely. i have decided to marry adrian, rory, and dj all at the same time. they're hot. gavin's hot too but i'd have to wear a strap-on ;) jk jk.

Fabulous darling fabulous.

hmm, so Ari and Ellen don't get along? interesting... that's a new twist. I like that; it makes it more unique and creative, instead of the cliche "omg the sisters are best friends!"

great job =) love the story so far.

~ Aria

I read all your chapters of this book just today aren't you proud? Very good it made me laugh a whole bunch! The whole Gavin guy just makes me laugh constantly!