This was wonderful, Paul! ^_^

I liked it, a lot... Brings up a few memories.
The imagery was beautiful.


And remember to update "The thin line between sinner, and savior"

This was really moving, I enjoyed it immensely!
The only thing is... isn't "rome" supposed to be "roam"?

Other than that, fantastic job!

wow this gave me tingles - absolutely love the last few lines - realy realy effective adn well writen - brilliant!

I've been a real jerk, I'm sorry if you felt any doubt for me not reviewing you. I've been having his major writer's block. I love your poem, and thank you for the review for Silent Petals

adaku-chan

I have to say, overall it was good. There were a few minor hiccups though, like someone else pointed out, the meter, the flow, some misspellings. But, these are easily corrected.

I love the imagery you created in this poem! You did a great job in writing it.

I really love this poem too. Props to you, your writing is excellent.

Damn, this is really good. I wish I could write stuff like this. It's great. But I'll probably need something bad to happen around me to write something this enthralling. So maybe I guess I don't want to write great stuff like this just yet. Nice job ^_^

I think it's very well written.

Personally, I agree that the meter is a bit off at parts, but I really like the ababb scheme, and there are certain lines like "Were tears water the ground" that I particularly appreciate.

Good work!

The way that you wrote this is beautiful, and the message is a great one too!


Best Wishes!

Hm... I like your poetry... but there is one thing I noticed (and it's something I notice alot... in my own poetry, lol) There are some lines where the flow seems kind of off but I"m not going to go on and on about that and tell you to fix something because... I read those reviews and say whatever, I'm not changing anything. Lol. Y'up. ...I don't know why I'm talking about this. Your summary was what caught my attention even though it was just lines from the poem so... Great lines or something. God, I'm pathetic... Always rambling... Lol. Goodbye.