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| Midnights Scream 2007-07-29 ch 1,  | abuse:0 weird yet I kinda like it. |
| Lady E 2007-05-07 ch 1, | abuseUnconventional for sure. It is a little depressing to think of, but young boys like Cassius were probably and unfortunately often taken advantage of. Although...how realistic is the sex change, I wonder? |
| SerialXLain 2007-03-22 ch 1, | abuseValerius is...wow. O_O A crazy manwhore. The part with the play made me think of him as a man-sized little boy... I could see him throwing a tantrum if they messed up or something... Wow. Poor Cassius. I think he needs a hug ;-; And from someone who isn't Valerius. Forget poor Cassius. He ** me off. All 'Oh woe is me' one second and then 'No, no, you're mine ** me please' the next. Rawr. I understand that he wants to stay alive, but I'd rather get killed than be forced to ** a statue... Unless it was a crazily painful way to die...then I wouldn't... Rawr. Good story...but it made me mad. XD xo Pfft. Offending people. Pfft. The statue sex wasn't offending. Pfft. (It wasn't... I'm just sayin') |
| xanthofile 2007-03-09 ch 1, | abuseoffend. *laughs* well, you know that you'd be hard pressed to offend me, at any rate. i found it interesting, if not holding in vein to your usual tone of writing. still beautiful and elegent when it should otherwise be horrifying. *laughs* that's what i love about your writing, you know. anyways, i'm glad you posted this one too. |
| Esquirella 2007-02-20 ch 1, | abuseThis was an interesting piece. I liked it a lot. |
| Rhapsody's Shadow 2007-02-20 ch 1, | abuseI like it. Although at first I thought we were going to get a nice happy story out of you but, no such luck. Still nicely entertaining |