A fantastic and twisted story. How do you come up with the ideas? But i have to say in chapter 5 Eden is one hell of a push over compared with the previous chapters. I can understand becoming softer with Caleb but with Ren i think you need to create a reason for treating her nicely all of a sudden. Other than that please keep writing.

Yeah, if the demons get more humoid that'd be really good because then you might have a little trouble especially with Ren if they look like a human. :) and this chapter was interesting I like learning about Edan. And Caleb did really good for being a noobie at this.

:) It's interesting I like Edan and Caleb. I wonder how he has demon blood in him. It seem interesting though and I shall continue to read.:)

I'm glad you updated! But the chapter was extremely fast paced and the thing with Eden and his past with other guys was confusing. But besides that, it was a great chapter.
Maybe later on in the story you could bring in higher class demons, but right now, I like the way they're being portrayed.

You said it was going to be over the weekend and I waited and ::gasp:: it never came! Now it's here! ::fan girl squeal:: yes! and now for a bit o' correcting...

“Well to me it seemed kind of…physical” I snarl. This seems a little out of character for Edan. If he's just a cold, heartless bastard then he would either
A) stay quiet and give "the evil glare of doom"
B) give the middle finger
C) make a personal attack on that person's emotions (even if it is off topic)

“Yeah ‘cause that makes sense, send the most experienced off together” Ren hisses, looking around encase the demon was near by. This is a minor error; encase should be in case.

Another thing I noticed is like in the above sentence there's no coma after the last word of the quote/saying/whatever. It should be...

“Yeah, ‘cause that makes sense, send the most experienced off together,” Ren hisses, looking around in case the demon was near by.
I'm not quite sure about the coma after yeah, but I'm going to put it there.

I could see Edan being a ** in his younger years, but if it was instead of hurting himself, wouldn't he be an abusive ** who only has one-night stands? Just a thought...

As a last note, I'd like to say well done on the fight scene! Killing! >=) Hope to hear from you soon!

Oh man I got to the last chapter. Hopefully you're planning on updating soon because I would really like to know where this story goes.

Dare I say it? Despite my lesbianism, Eden is hot. I really like this story. I was really expecting cliche stupid demon hunting story. So far it really isn't. And I hope it stays that way. good job.

This story is so cool. I'm really not into male slash, but the way you write actually makes up for it. Great job. You get added to my favorite story list.

^.^ 'tis a good story...sorta reminds me of bleach...God! I LOVE that manga! anyways...um...I'm writing this review like a couple hours after I read the story and I tend to forget things so yeah...nothing more to say for Cathy-sama! hope to hear more soon!

i love it!
this is seriously my new
favorite story.
so please continue!

This story is going really good. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Another awesome piece of work. It's kinda weird that i know what's gonna happen next but meh, carry on the good work my friend and i'm alway happy to help even though you think most of my ideas are stupid...lol